By Emily Zeller
Hello Young Learners!
Sample Paragraph Revising for Beginners
Instructions: Carefully go through each paragraph and see how many mistakes you can find! The answer key will be submitted Sunday, Aug 11th. Have fun!
At the Beach
Kim went beach today. First she had a picnic then she went swimming. She found shells in sand. one shells were yellow-green. Another shell was bluish-white. She built sandcastles all day until time to go home. Kim was happy she went to the Beach today.
At the Restaurant
François is a waiter at a french restaurant in Paris. He is tall, and, has a grey mustache. He work there many years he is a hard worker. His favorite dish to serve is Crème Brulay.
Billy and Amanda ran out to play. They’re favorite game to play is foursquare. In the field, several boys, are, playing baseball. Billy wants to play to. He goes to join boys in field. Amanda stays to play, on the swings.
Mother and Timmy are at the store. First mother goes to get some cereal Timmy loves frosted flakes. Mother goes to get some milk. Timmy asks if he can get chocclate. But mother tells him no. Timmy helps mother put the food in bags; he likes to watch the conveyor belt pull the food to the cashier. The cashier hands mother a receipt and says goodbye to Timmy.